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Dust

Liars, fakes, and horror shows
They're all part of the plan
To destroy peace and humanity
To corrupt our world
And, to extinct the human population

Beer, vodka
Loses one's self-control
And lures them to fuck in the darkness

Cigarettes, weed
The normal habit of humans
Illegal or not
One needs something to hold onto
Either religion, love, or drugs
It's one of them
Or it's time to call the funeral service


'We are the creators of the world,' a noble man had once said
But, there's glitches and open spaces surrounding us
And, not enough time to fix them all


One day the world will be gone with not a trace of anyone left

But a speckle of dust

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    December 29, 2007

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Fantastic write ! I love the flow and flooding images.
    Very nicely said

    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • Danneh
    December 17, 2007

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    Not all your commas are correct. Like it should be But a speckle of dust.
    I think. I could be wrong of course.

    Beautiful, darkish, and totally true..
    While all the time still remaining humorous.

    -Danneh<3 (Good jo