When the world gets us down,
We frown.
We must remember that happiness,
Comes from the heart.
Comes from loved ones.
It comes from family.
What we really need to know,
In others it will show.
In others it will grow.
In hearts it will glow.
To be alone, it hurts,
It hurts to see others happy.
It hurts to see others laugh.
What we don't realize,
Is others care too.
We must be free to love.
Author notes
I have no Idea what this means but I hope it helps. And I hope you have a happy birthday.
A contest entry
- Make me feel good by Whyitt U.
2200 points, ended December 19, 2007, 19 entries
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Comments
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This made ME feel good
Lovely
Warmest,
Mylee -
This has a wonderful sentiment to it, but your just telling me things...not making me feel anything. I'm not sure why you have happy birthday in the authors notes.
...my birthday was in Oct. Thanks for taking the time to enter.
Wyatt
xxx
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Cute and nice rhyme for the 'ow' sound makes me awww
. About the meaning, well it's direct to the point.
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