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Cherubims of Summer

July cherries,
crimson Red,
summer's chandeliers.

Lake winds blowing,
just a breeze,
kissing my eyes and skin.

Sparrow swoops,
O cherubim,
winged beauty
amongst blue sky,

Cicadas singing
In sycamores,
sand and grass
on the kitchen floors

From youngsters
joyous promenade,
tanned skin,

bare toes,

ah yes,

Summer.

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  • sheltered
    January 1, 2008
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    Tight... Great imagery and metaphor.


  • micol
    December 30, 2007

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    wonderful and warm sequence of summer icons. I especially like the cherry chandeliers...just the right touch of the everyday and the elegant.


  • Harrisham Minhas
    December 17, 2007
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    You have described the joy of summers in a wonderful way.


  • zochit2me gold member
    December 17, 2007

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    So glad to see you here.
    It has been a while my brother.
    This is light and lovely and paints a lovely picture of summer.
    I wish you much luck in this contest.

    Becky

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