I can't
say
a word.
The day has ended
and night has come.
We belonged in dusk.
But dusk was short
by a mile and a day,
although we drew it out
by creating definitions
only we could understand.
The dusk has passed,
and I'm silently waiting
to see if the dawn
will bring more freedom
and a truth like no other.
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Hood Wink!!!
Another beautiful piece, you capture the imagery so beautifully and easily draw the reader into this world... gorgeous
Karen
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Dusk! I love that word.
This was so dark and so... perfect! I love it.
Yeah, I know it's been a while since I've commented, but I'm really glad I read this one!
Always,
Cassie
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Miiiiiiiiichelle
Miiiiiiiiiiiiichelle! *glomp*
It's been a while since you have postered. Postered more, pur-lease! Dusk and dawn... still confusing... But you made more sense then what I could of hoped(does that even make sense!?)!
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Hey darling,
You leave one thinking after they read this one! What a great job on this one! Hope to see more of you soon! I miss you..
Ek is lief vir jou altyd
Mom
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I like this. Very creative. ( =
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