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The Time of Your Life

The slightest touch brings feelings of pleasure.
You tell him to just give it hard and fast.
But yet he goes slow, torturing your body so.
You are thinking,
“O, no!!! He don’t like me”
When he in reality he is staring at you body.
Wondering how he got something to so beautiful and wonderful.
He goes ever so slow, and you want it fast and hard.
He wants to give it you as slow as possible. 
He is afraid he might hurt your perfect body.
A moan starts in you throat and escapes your lips.
He pulls you closer and kisses your lips.
He  put it in, he kissed and whispered in your ear.
"I love you"
U whisper it back.
And then there it was.
You didn't know how to take it, but you want it.
As the moments go, and the moans are heard.
It’s all over, he did not say a word.
You thought you did something wrong.
But he was thinking that you are the best thing that ever happened to him.
He holds you tightly, his face resting on yours.
You feel a tear drop, and you turn your head around and see he is crying.
You kiss away the tears and ask him what was wrong.
He said.
“I can't believe I have you, I don't deserve you,
you are the best thing that ever happened to me.
I love you.”
Your eyes burn from the tears you hold back.
You kiss him hard and deep, and whisper.
“I feel the same.”

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  • FrozenredTears
    February 3

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    damn

    Did you ever show me this poem? I dont member lol anyway few tips... dont use slang in this poem it kind of throws it off a bit “O, no!!! He don’t like me” might make it a bit stronger but i do like this one keep it up!


  • Crimson Blaze
    December 17, 2007
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    thhis is great i love the way you describe everything that is happening.
    great write keep it up