I'd rape an angel,
For that one moment of bliss.
My monstrous appearance fades,
As i steal her crimson kiss.
Holding her sweet little body,
Dangerously close to mine.
My hands running over her soft white skin,
Body convulsing as shivers flee down her spine.
Showing her my lust tainted love,
She flaps her wings with a horrific shriek.
I whisper " i'm not gonna hurt you,"
She screams "get the fuck off me freak."
Plunging myself deep inside her,
Body salivating, i'm drenched and she's drowning.
Reaching out for her hand,
I smile but she's still frowning.
The ecstasy builds,
The task is done.
And for the briefest of moments,
Me and my angel are as one.
I feel truly beautiful,
Like i could fly away into the setting sun.
But as the semen ceases its flow,
I realize what i have done.
I killed the light inside her,
To you this i confide.
I lay down right beside her,
And wilted by her side.
Author notes
This was a really old poem which i lost and tried to re-do. Its not as good as the original but i like it. Please dont give me abuse for this poem saying im a rapist freak or anything, its supposed to be metaphorical.
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I agree with the others... The title was what made me stop and read it, but it's very true, as Helen said, of the human race nowadays, and that's what makes it even more tragic. Rhyme doesn't usually cut it for me, but this was pretty damn good. Great job, and best of luck always.
Love and light
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Wow.
I'm at a loss for words. This was really amazing.
Certainly appropriate given the way humans are acting now days.
I'm glad I found this. Thank you for giving me the chance to read it
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wow
Amazing♥
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I really, really like this. I must admit, the title itself is what caused me to pause and read it. But I really, really like it.
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it's strange putting yourself into the persona of the one doing the harm to people.
I did find the way you used the turn angel and then used swearing, as I couldn't imagine an 'angel' swearing, especially the 'f' word, but ya know, times do change lol. -
this is a really good poem..
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this is a really cool poem i love it but im not really sure what it means.
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