Pinpointing the clues to revealing my evil self,
becoming the wistful demon of the withdrawn world...
Learning to withhold the anxious escapes of air....
A wisk of emptyness, the vodoo rested in this useless body,
the playdoll they love to caress and destroy...
The disgusting vermin who touches this voluminous soul,
the utopia of the guilty...
The uproaring silent of a underline tragedy,
being called a thief, the unjustifiable, the imbecil...
the typical psycho in abortion with treadning advices,
who toughens up when he smiles...
The unbelivable flatter between two enemies and friends,
the liars, the thiefs, the ones who are give-in-self-prostitutes,
the one's who should -in reality- remain faceless, are unjust and served fair,
plus more....
The faceless compass of a unhumane human soul,
who revolves into a cataclysim reality where the empty tunings of a harp,
are the revolution songs of a sweet and obnoxious lullaby...
That paradoxical word we live in, the vittorious fights against each other,
the faceless reasons to why declare ,the useless meaning of love....
And yet parodies always have two thumbs up,
because behind the laughter and the satire lyrics,
there - in that scrucial moment-
the lies become real,
and the truth becomes faceless
♥
In a list
A contest entry
- everything and anything by x Bright Eyes x.
525 points, ended February 4, 2008, 84 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
LOVE AINT REAL... IS JUST A FANTASY CONCEALED
Comments
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nice job you did well on this and i think that the imagry is great in this piece.nice job
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Very beautiful. I am sorry for not commenting but school has been very hectic and I hardly have any time. Your Freind-Damien
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very...
intense, I do think you have moved on with this write, or should I say altered your style for the contest. ?. Sounds as though it could be very political as well as for every day living (mundane living) of lying and loving. Well done...ian.
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really good write....kept me into it the whole piece....keep up the good work
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Thats pretty intense
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ok now put that in english and i'm good lol great write!
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lol so anyone knows lol including you sis, here are some words from the poem lol;
wistful: sad and pensive;
withdrawn: removed;
withhold: hold something;
vermin: is like a direct offense to some1;
cataclysm: disaster;
paradoxical: contradictory;
vittorious: in latin i guess it is means victorious;
soo.. there you go lol
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