We had been together for about
two months, and he said he had a question,
I wasnt expecting it,
but thats when he said it,
"will you marry me"
those four words meant so much,
I was stunned but my heart made a decision,
I said yes and now we are together forever
and ever.
its a binding love for eternity.
A contest entry
- What's the Best Thing That Happened to You This Year? by Vickie J.
600 points, ended December 29, 2007, 8 entries
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A marriage proposal would have to be right up there in the top ten-I think David Letterman would have to agree. Thank you for your sweet entry~
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yes it is amazing...no problem thanx for taking the time to read it..hope you enjoyed it
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listen sweetheart. you are 16. you don't know what a "binding love for eternity" is. i know what its like to be in love, but i dont want to hear that you can feel a love so powerful as to last forever in two months. i do not believe in getting engaged in high school. if your love is so true and strong, why dont you prove it in the test of time??? i think your decision is a mutual but rash attempt to avoid the loneliness that being single can bring. in the poem itself, you couldv'e used some imagery.
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i dont know if you remember leaving this comment but I am still with him and still in love. we are engaged
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who are you to say who can be deep in love or not? are you saying adults could fall in love in 2 months but teenagers cant? thats bull right there! and on your profile it says your 16 too so shut up...just becuase you dont know the strength of love doesnt mean i dont. teenagers can find love so keep your nose in your own business...plus you dont even know how long we have been engaged for.
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