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Good Ole Fashioned Love

Long before the first eclipse

so long before those chains & whips

there was something special in the air

knowing in my heart I'll forever hold you near.

 

The touch of your hand

freezes me where I stand

Even though I'm just a man

I'll do all that I possibly can.

 

To make your dreams come true

and to show just how much I love you

I'd give you everything that is mine to give

With you in love is where I will always live.

 

So many times a passion so strong

when two hearts beating with the rhthym of the same song

We find ourselves so happily satisfied

with each moment we share so glorified.

 

No longer afraid to fall

because with you I have it all

Not afraid of the painful tears

With you is where I'll spend the rest of my years.

 

A world so full of change

where lives constantly rearrange

I found you inside of cyberspace

and now no amount of you I will erase.

 

So, take this heart of mine

and always feel my love divine

Like the comfort of hand in glove

we've found our own good ole fashioned love.

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  • Ted E Bare gold member
    February 14, 2008

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    It's a great thing to always be able to find love no matter how it happened. It seems the pen was stroked from the heart as the words lay here rejoicing a love so proud. Congratulations on the Honorable Mention.

    Ted E


  • seamaiden
    January 4, 2008
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    This was a beautiful poem that you wrote for your AP/future wife. I wish the best for the two of you and hope that you will share much happiness together. Thank you for sharing this with me and keep writing poet. The rhyming is excellent. I did falter a little with the meter. All in all it is lovely. seamaiden ♥


  • januaryrain gold member
    December 22, 2007
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    awww, how wonderful, all the best for you


  • tarcus
    December 22, 2007

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    nice sentiments

    Wonder if you could do me the honour of looking at this and tell me if you think it is dark or light
    [ So here we are again my son the nights are getting colder ]


  • Marshall013004
    December 20, 2007

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    O this was so sweet ! Such a lucky lady she is to have a sweetheart like you. you have a wonderful way with words and thank you for sharing your talent with us all!!!


  • stavykm gold member
    December 19, 2007

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    Oh So Beautiful

    Wow what a beautiful romantic poem. I like this poem very much and your committment is awesome. The title Good Ole Fashion Love is catchy and I liked it. The whole poem flowed nicely with visuals and beautiful rhyming romance and ole fashion love. Great write.
    Blessings
    Kelle Marie
    stavykm


  • Hetha gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    Awww..This is so sweet! You truly live up to your pen name in this.


  • xorandomxo
    December 18, 2007
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    wow this is beautiful work very emotional

    ♥ steph

  • midnightblue1272
    December 18, 2007

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    The Love Poet

    You truly are the love poet. These words are beyond sweet; they are the sign of true love. Fine work.

  • Liquid memories
    December 17, 2007

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    such sweet pleasant words of love. success in the contest. heres hoping the future mrs, loves it as well.


  • daviscth silver member
    December 17, 2007

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    Sweetheart, this is such a wonderful love poem. I can tell you are very much in love for your poems have all been wonderful and the imagery is great. Love you, Cathy


  • SweetNessaLynn
    December 17, 2007

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    WOW

    Joel, you have written a masterpiece here. Victoria is a very luck girl.
    Best wishes to you both,
    -Nessa


  • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
    December 17, 2007

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    It definetly had an erotic reference at the start there, but what you grew it into, such loving words, WOW
    You couldnt say it any better Joel

    Beaufitul beautiful words


    Cindy


  • Arizona Sunset
    December 17, 2007

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    Joel, this is beautiful, and your ap wife and girlfriend is tickled to have this lovely dedication...awwww I am so happy for you brother dear blessings always to you ~ Trisha~


  • Angelic Princess21
    December 17, 2007

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    very good write. and well done with the rhyming better than i could do
    thanks for sharing this with me

    ~Angel~

  • piccola silver member
    December 17, 2007

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    chains and whips? OMG I can't believe you're writing about chains and whips...or that you found a decent rhyme for them.


  • A Lonely Soul
    December 17, 2007

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    Oh sweetheart, this piece is so touching and beautiful! I love it baby I've searched so long to have an old fashion love like you and I share and I'm so happy and thankful I found it with you my darling husband. I won't forget nor will I ever let go of you, I have you and you'll be with me forever and more my love. I love you so much sweetie, this poem is just amazing. Thank you, and keep up the excellent writes my love. *hugs & kisses*
    your AP wife, girlfriend and most definite wife of your future.
    ~~Victoria~~

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