In the blink of an eye
Life will pass you by
Stop to slow down
now turn around,
look, do you see?
life is waiting...
so do your thing, but remember...
the time it takes for a blink
one moment will have fared...
never to occur again.
Author notes
I chose option #3
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i like this, it shows that theres hope out there that you should make the best of everything, because its gone "in a blink of an eye"
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In the blink of an eye
Life will pass you by
Stop to slow down
great begining i love your rhyme scheme it was great -
This is interesting.
The rhyme scheme was very pretty. -
as usual sunflower another wonderful write good luck here and in the other contest as well
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I love this poem, it reminds me to take chances and to make sure that I make each moment count, even the bad ones.
Thank you for entering and all the best in the contest. -
This is very good. And it's the truth, life goes by so fast!!! Life can end just as it begins... great work! I love it!!! keep it up!
Crimson -
I like this one a lot. It's very good. I love the lines:
Stop to slow down
now turn around,
look, do you see?
life is waiting...
It's really wonderful. Thanks for the read and keep it up.
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