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Luna Lane

Seasoned greetings 

howled out loud

with nary a sound

 

Bound  by Selene's call

we fall

to full moon's 

'mazement

 

Freezing frames 

of snow clad skins

Welcoming warmly

winters brisk breathing

 

Heating the heart

to partake, 

awake...

and serenade the Soul

 

 

 

 

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  • Randomly Beautiful
    March 3, 2008
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    Thank you for the entry. :f


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    December 20, 2007

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    Congratulations on the bronze I was going to well I did enter but deleted it cause people didn't understand my poem Recollections. Your poem is very nice and the trophy well deserved.

  • tara wilson gold member
    December 18, 2007
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    congrats, Nicky...I love this one..


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    December 18, 2007

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    Oh how beautifully done.... the sound so loud it is no sound.... the snow clad skins.... oh man, gorgeous penning.


  • Nicolette gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    Lovely poetry, Nicky - the cold against the warmth, the brisk breath of winter and the serenade of the soul. Loved the depth of spirituality here - one of the trademarks of your writings!!

    ~ Nicolette

  • tara wilson gold member
    December 17, 2007

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    beautiful...very creative presentation and alliteration...very lovely..

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