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Internet Love

From a smile to a blush in just a while,
From email address, to numbers to dial.
Closer and closer we soon became,
You said you loved me, I felt the same.

In a matter of time, you wanted to meet,
To be together, our love so sweet.
I didn’t think you’d cause me any harm,
How wrong was I, to fall for your charm.

Creepy and dark pacing the alleyway,
10 minutes late to my dismay.
A tap on the shoulder, a wrinkled smirk,
My long lost prince; a perverted old jerk.

A few minutes later and all was done,
Left cold and alone with my skirt undone.
My innocence gone, my heart torn in two,
It seemed like a nightmare, but I knew it was true.

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I wrote this for a form assembley, it has some hidden meanings (:

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  • AmikiHilki
    December 26, 2007
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    Hehe yeah, sorrry I'll change the font.

  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    December 24, 2007
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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Having been a victim of something very very similar [I was stuck at a house not an ally] I can relate to this in many ways.

    I am sorry you endured this.
    Powerfully penned
    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda

    P.S: I suggest though that you change the font colour as the contrast with the background is hurtful on 'old' eyes like mine

  • littlelouise
    December 18, 2007
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    I liked the poem personally. I though it really captured how someone would feel in this situation