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Winter




Moon's soft fingers reach out
swathing everything in light
ghostly shadows flicker
chasing whispers of the night,

naked branches holding
a long lost souls fevered prayer
snowy  roofs and lintels
huddled beneath sky so rare,

night time creatures listen
as snowflakes carefully fall
whiskers frozen, spellbound
nature's enigmatic call.

 

 

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  • paullallady silver member
    January 1, 2008

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    what a sweet, serene picture you have painted
    here. Your choice of words was perfect for their
    imagery and depth. wonderful.


  • Sonja
    December 23, 2007

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    What a nice and tranquil picture of winter's nature. I hope to see more of them on your site soon.
    ~Sonja~