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Lucy sky-diamond
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Known as Lucy :-)
Well, i'd hope to gain a whole load of experience, by working around much more advanced poets and being able to learn from them.
Note to potential external readers; has been printed and used in school (by me), for those reading and thinking 'plaguarism'
A new write, not a pre write, but looking back through my other stuff none of it seemed good enough to even try and enter, and this just came to me, so, i hope you like it, and/or could give me some pointers for improvement,
Lucy
A contest entry
- Teen Idol 7: Round One by Tangled Angle.
525 points, ended January 1, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your best, most beloved write by Austere.
2300 points, ended February 10, 2008, 33 entries
Honorable mention
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[out of 10]
originality: 10
creativity: 8
Catchy Title: 4
Transitions: 5
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Line-breaking: 12
(Balance of) ideas: 12
Length: 15
[out of 20]
Structure/Coherency: 15
Interesting opening: 19
Effective ending: 17
Universal Theme: 18
Flow: 18
Focus: 19
Passion/Emotion: 20
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Message: 25
Initial impact: 22
Final impact: 21
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TOTAL: 260
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Again, congratulations, and good luck.
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Lurvly Images and great perspective - lol the paparazzi will get you for this! Good Luck!!!
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Wow!!
Oh My Word what images You have brought forth
Love these lines:
Free press over freedom,
to dream, to try, to breathe,
Privacy; a myth
persecution in the homeland of democracy,
the diplomats,
the fair and the just,
The American,
Powerful message You convey~~
Keep that quill dancing...
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Many blessings to You in the Challenge Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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This is interesting. Quite unique. There's something special about this one. It does stand out.
Thanks for the entry, best of luck.
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