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Urban Winter {Haiku}

See through spiked nest,
grip upon urban landscape.
Frozen world of rust.

A contest entry

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  • Arizona Sunset
    January 4, 2008
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    beautiful Haiku...love this! Excellent imagery...~ momma


  • Swan song gold member
    December 23, 2007
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    Well done This is very different


  • Maybe.I.Am.Broken.
    December 22, 2007

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    unique and it is very interesting...

    I liked this piece!!

    Keep Writing,
    Annie Shadows


  • Blue Rew silver member
    December 17, 2007

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    very unique. I like the vision of rusted gates and litter that still manages to spoil the blanket of white. Blue


    • DayDreamMuse
      December 18, 2007
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      I like having things intertwine with one another. Right about now urban landscape is almost everywhere I see and winter and city structures mix quite interesting. Thanks once more for the comment.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 17, 2007

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    This is a nice haiku about winter goodluck to you in this contest best wishes and much love always

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