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The Cocoon Breaks

The cocoon breaks
And out of it
Comes a beautiful
Butterfly.

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  • carole21
    December 20, 2007

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    very nice

    simple but nice . . like "The cocoon breaks" and "beautiful Butterfly" . . there is beauty in simplicity, too . . good luck in the contest !