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Dip In Me..

When no one’s beside,
No one by my side.

I sit down,
Tightly hold on.

Eyes close down,
Everything turns black-brown.

Suddenly a blackout,
Real world I leave out.

Move into a dream land,
A creation of my mind.

My weird imagination,
Such a wonderful creation.

Where there is peace, harmony,
Soothing jingle cacophony.

Mesmerizing are the mountain valley,
Chirping birds making merry.

Violent river rapids, mighty waterfall,
Surrounding tree cover ever standing tall.

Oh! Such a majestic scenery,
Surely of here the “Lord” is jury.

Often with him(myself) I go for such walk,
Or else with myself(him) I often talk.

It is true, I don’t pretend,
Call it “God” or call it my friend.

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  • wholehearted1heme
    May 8, 2008
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    YOUR POEM IS SUPERB....


  • RuthKephart
    December 17, 2007
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    I'm not sure what your word was to be in this contest since I'm unable to see who has submitted the poem. Please refer to the rules again as the word is to be used in the title and I'll stop back later to make sure you have adhered to the rules
    Ruth