Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Presence

Open your eyes,
Feel the presence creepin' in,
I am fully aware of the presence,
Cautious of being the cause.
I am there in my head,
But on the earth I am unbound.
Everywhere at once,
And nowhere at all.
Easy to be seen,
But unoticed around you.
Close your eyes now,
Feel my presence now,
Know that I am near.
I am here in my head,
And I am trying to get out.

What do you think????

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • colorxmyxworld
    December 18, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    hahahaha i like it
    and the background
    the baby is soooooo cute
    but yeah my prents are pissing me off
    so like w/e
    whats up?


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    December 18, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    whispers and screams the presence of our souls, you have captured the souls purpose beautiful poem. God bless