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Morning/Noon/Night ...

coffee
wake me love you
with lunch i enjoy you
dinner too, and awake i stay
hate you

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Cinquain: syllable count of 2, 4, 6, 8, 2

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  • parntsoftwins
    December 18, 2007

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    I really enjoyed this, made me laugh. Funny yet speaks the truth at the same time. Thank you for sharing such a cute poem.


  • azure85 gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    LOL Oh, your L5 is funny. We love the brew, makes us perk up all day long, but can make night time take along time in coming. Thank you so much, this was great!