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Love Letter to My Children (Priceless)

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the beating of my heart when you all arrive on Christmas morn

relief...you're safely here


the feeling as we gather at the table to eat

good......like the old days


the excitement around the decorated tree

fun......the look on each face


the conversation after all is done and over

precious......catching up on lost time



the reason why we celebrated

Jesus...........PRICELESS


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  • thelordreigns gold member
    December 26, 2007

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    It is so wonderful to gather together to celebrate He who is all to us. This is a lovely poem. Thank you for your entry.

    - joanne


  • Tam
    December 19, 2007

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    AMEN....

    and yet...we tend to forget the reason...don't we?
    how sad I find this...
    I am guilty of the same...I am no better...and I so wish that mankind and myself could find it our lowly hearts to remember...and be grateful...for Christmas' true meaning...and the HOPE within...
    this is so poignant and powerful in it's simplicity...
    my favorite type of poetry...
    I will wear this poem for days...in my heart!
    very well done!
    Blessings! Tammy


  • tawk gold member
    December 19, 2007
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    Heart Warming

    This is beautiful and such a heartfelt write for your children. If it was me I would change the font color from black to maybe white so it would show up better. I loved this write. Merry Christmas to you and your family and good luck in the contest