The doorbell rang early Christmas morning
I answered it sleepy eyed and yawning
There in front of me was Santa Claus
With a tiny object clutched in his paws
That small object, you see, was the key
To the Cadillac parked at the curb for me.
In a list
A contest entry
- Unique Gift Giving At Christmas by daviscth.
450 points, ended January 1, 2008, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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it is good. i like it much. how ever there is a ten line minimum. in order to stay in the contest. you either have to enter some more lines or remove the poem and enter a different one. i really would hate to do this since it is very interesting. you have until the contest closes to make these changes or i will be forced to disqualify you...
please don't make me do that.
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What a wonderful way to receive such an amazing gift.
Nicely told.
Ann
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Oh this is just wonderful!!! Thank you so much for telling me about your unique gift. Good luck in my contest sweetie, Cathy
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Yeah, Santa! Great humorous Christmas poem--good luck in the contest!
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