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~Deep~


Supine in surrender
to back-wash of self
made waves.


A contest entry

Honesty Before Nicety

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  • tara wilson gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    congrats on the bronze...
    interesting poem..this says so much.....I think we do make most of our own 'waves'...


  • Naridill
    December 18, 2007

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    Oh - I love this - its gripping - overly simple but such indepth imagery.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.


  • vici377
    December 17, 2007
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    SUPERB


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    December 17, 2007
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