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All I Want for Christmas is You

you gifted her
with dandelions,
lovingly whispering
the significance
of the small
white tufts
on stems.

she doesn't
even understand,
neither does
she care.

I do.

Author notes

Advanced merry Christmas.

The picture I got actually describes me right now. I do wish you would love me. Or if you do, show it.

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  • Naridill gold member
    December 30, 2007

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    Very enthralling - heart and relative emotions penned within this piece. Very captivating.

    Thanks for entering.
    Much luck.