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Petals in Pocket

 
 

 

 

 
This happy club.
 
This friendship of circle and line,
of sisters curled like flowers in cracks,
poised between sun and moon

with one light to read by and one

to understand:
 
how chapters of wonder are opened and closed
in turn;


how years run like naked sentences, ready
to flow forever, to speak past punctuation
and start again;
 
how no one dies when the clock strikes twelve-

its hands a compass needle, pointing north

to that home beyond sky.

 

So read on until words fall past your end

 
and bury each paragraph fondly in mind
then move to the next with eyes too hungry
for sight alone.
 

 

Reach for the flame of each flower gone,
for those petals kept in a pocket of heart.
 
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  

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For the Evil Pants - may they always be tight.

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  • rebeka
    December 20, 2007

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    this is so pretty Kate, the image of sisters curled together, the closeness of thought, you took inspiration from the movie title and turned it into your own beautiful poetry, i loved 'pocket of heart' and the happy club, your words brought smiles to many you know, you have a way of doing what you do very well ..wonderful poetry.


  • misselaineous gold member
    December 17, 2007
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  • ardentMarch gold member
    December 17, 2007

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    this is such a beautiful poem..
    I love the opening line as well, I find this so uplifting to read this morning..


  • transcendental baby gold member
    December 17, 2007

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    I love the references to reading and the eternal nature of the spirit growing past its bounds ... lovely write full interesting things to ponder


  • Rowan gold member
    December 17, 2007

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    wow~ what's that word I'm looking for? Stunning? nah...
    brilliant? hmmm. Close. I loved this. Can you tell?
    I love that opening line too...

  • michael thomas
    December 17, 2007

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    Kate this is love from you in a most beautiful way. All who read this can feel as if they are included. That is magic on your part.


  • Cat gold member
    December 17, 2007
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    i love how you start this piece with the singular, stand out line-
    i love the sisters curled like flowers in cracks- some beautiful poetry in this piece- but mostly i just love the sentiment of this piece-
    the heart of the piece-

    a perfect entry in
    rebeka's contest..

    m

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