Cackling with a grin and eyes wide that wonder,
Coming up with awkward topics to ponder...
Hands tied behind your back,
Nothing to keep you sane but a smack;
Although you still don't snap out of it; you just point and laugh.
But really, you do'nt even know where you're at!
You are introduced to a few different things:
a therapist, a lunchlady, and a machine.
The therapist interviews you, asks you many a thing.
Like where the mon goes in the daytime, and other simple things.
The lunchlady is asked what she'd fed you the past few days...
"Nothing but the same old thing, in the same old way."
So you are directed to the machine now.
You point and giggle at every bowel.
They've had enough of you, electricity your end...
They lower the helmet to your head, and you have met Lunacy's Lady-Friend...
Author notes
option #2
A contest entry
- For all of the CRAZY poets out there... by AutumnsFlame.
973 points, ended March 15, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Loon?
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This poem was slightly odd... It was very straight-forward and I think you could've put more description to this. You could also watch your flow too... It was a bit off in some places.... other than that, a good poem. Thank you for entering my contest and for putting the option number!
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i thank you for ur comment.
yeah, it was sort of meant to be odd.... most peoms about an 'insane person' are odd. yes, this isn't exactly my best poem when it comes to flow and description. -_-
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PLEASE PUT THE OPTION NUMBER OF CHOICE IN YOUR AUTHOR'S NOTES!!!!!.... This is your last warning.
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last warning? i don't think i got a first warning... heh. <:/ sry. it's there now
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o_O
I liked this a lot, but I had to read it twice to really fully understand. It's a good poem and definitely a little weird, but a great write nonetheless.
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i agree. i would rather die in battle though.not from a disease or bleeding to death.but thats reallly goodd! just wondering what made u think of it.
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