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What I hide.

The face I wear lives in a jar by the door
my real face I keep hidden.
Every morning I put it on
so that you can never see
what I hide.

My smiles are made of face paint
so you won't see the scars.

You won't see my suffering;
my pain and my nightmare.
I lived in a dream;
now I wish I'd known reality.
Then I'd have been prepared.

My smiles are made of face paint
so you wont see the scars

I hide behind a fascade;
old scars of memories past.
Battles fought and lost,
for resons I cannot fathom;
Nor do I care.

My smiles are made of face paint
so you wont see the scars.

Therefore when I smile at you
it's just the face paint.
What I hide is,
the scarred and ruined persona that remains;
forever hidden.

So yes my Smiles are made of face paint,
after all you wouldn't want to see my scars.

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Prompt number 3 for char's contest.

...man what is it with me and depressing poetry?

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    lol but faye this is an amazing write it really brings alot to the prompt and the emotion is deep and effective.