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Saviour


My saviour in the dark,
In the times when I am lonely,
The times when I am sad,
The words pour onto paper,
For they are my only friend,
My only saviour,
In this life

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  • Bas
    December 29, 2007
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    this saviour you are thinking of is it an entity or a spiirt in your mind , when you are lonely and sad but i believe that down deep this is not your only friend theres got to be more than just the life you are living in these times there is hope and salvation from it all


  • Everwind Rising
    December 17, 2007

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    Emotional and poignant. I think many of us have found a salvation of sorts in writing and reading poetry.