• You told me to make coffee like as usual
Nothing is this is so far cruel
Just a routine I do everyday
And one more coffee for today
• The saucers and the cups so clean
Sparking bright like never been
The coffee hot in the pot
And to a sneeze me nose got caught
• I was walking into the room
But a since struck me so soon
Daddy was looking forward anyway
To get his hands on me in any possible way
• The guests around the table playing cards
Drinking and smoking like a bunch of retards
And the sneeze made me fall
The saucers the cups the coffee above all
• What could have made daddy so mad
That he lost his temper to bad
In front of the guest to ambush me
Getting his vicious hands all over me
• Dragging me on my back
As he initiates to attack
My back scratching over the mat
With his leash he began to splat
• The guests were entertained I guess
Seeing me in such a mess
My back oozing blood so fast
Every hit was like a blast
• “I didn’t mean to spill the coffee”
But daddy won’t listen to me
He went on pulling my ears
Enjoying seeing his daughter in tears
• Mommy died because of him
But to daddy it’s so dim
He’s doesn’t even admit
And never pities on me even a bit
• It was just an accident that happened today
An excuse, But I got bitten up bad either way
For me just a routine like every day
Daddy enjoys beating me what else I can say
now I sit over the bathroom sink
I trace my scars and deep i think
with thoughts of suicide running in my mind
i water my bleeding wounds and my teeth I grind
A contest entry
- Write A Poem about a picture!! by PsychoticallyInsane.
300 points, ended January 3, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is so sad! Abuse that so many go through in this twisted world... You have written this very well indeed!
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WOW Such emotion in this....
A story told so vividly through your words...
great job! Congrats on the gold!
Lynda
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Oh My Gosh!! I Love your poem!! It's the best one I have got so far. GREAT Job! I'm pretty sure your the winner, just let me comment on the other poems!! FANTABULOUS! Your an artist at heart, just what I was looking for. pat yourself on the back, You deserve it.
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i'm sorry if you went through this when you were a child, it's not a fair thing to have to go through at all. he should be locked up for causing harm and death to your mother, what a sick retard he is. best wishes and try to get yourself out of his way, before you end up like your mum. lots x
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Wow!! What a read! It is a shame that is the life that many know. and it is a sad fact, that I too can relate to the emotions in this one. You did a great job on this one!!
Best of luck in this contest!
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