Been hot and sweaty
For so long,
Taking a bath
Doesn't help much,
That day, that
beautiful day
With my cousins,
The waters splashing,
The wind breezing,
The water slides
were so exciting,
The cute guys talking
While standing,
Oh I wish it could
Last forever.
The waters were cooling,
They were fun and relaxing,
They aren't very deep,
They're just lovely,
I enjoy swimming,
The day I went
To the waterpark,
Is the day I refreshed.
Author notes
I love swimming but haven't found time....finally on Friday I went to a waterpark..and it was the best for this year.
A contest entry
- What's the Best Thing That Happened to You This Year? by Vickie J.
600 points, ended December 29, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
No bad comments, insults, destructive criticisms just tell me what does this poem makes u feel?
Comments
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What a great memory to tuck away and relive when life gets hectic. Thanks for sharing-best wishes in the contest~
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ah sweet
I love water parks! Next time take meh with you 
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Water parks are awesome! I can't wait until
they reopen in the summer! Great work here
and goo luck to you with this one!
Jeremy0826
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