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Come fly with me

Follow me on the ride of our lives
As we soar up high and touch the sky
To dance with the stars and shine

Come with me as I take you out
On an adventure you’ve never been on
Just me and you, and the blinding stars

Get onto the balloon I’ve blown up
That’ll take us there, abscond from
All our troubles, just to have fun and enjoy

Come fly with me, on this pure white balloon
For our broken hearts need to be mended
And touched by the angels that wander clueless 

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  • HeavensNewestAngel
    December 17, 2007

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    This is a great poem you wrote. Thank you for putting the number in the authors comment box. Best of luck in the contest


  • Walk-Free
    December 17, 2007

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    aww.. this reminded me of a song (:
    the chorus goes, "Come fly with me, come fly, come fly away"...

    "Come fly with me, on this pure white balloon
    For our broken hearts need to be mended
    And touched by the angels that wander clueless "

    what a beautiful write!

    best of luck in the contest, sweets!