A magical halo above her head
Following her everywhere
Her soft soles rest upon nature
Long logged black hair falling,
Resting gently on her back
Covering her gorgeous white dress
Beauty in her baby blue eyes
With curved and elongated lashes
Her largely amazing feathered wings
Lie gracefully with poise and elegance
And swish exquisitely with every move
Her dress sweeps the hard ground
And everything her fingers rest upon
Changes into soft chilled snow
With so much power and gorgeousness
It’s sorrowful to see such an angelic soul
Trapped within time, nowhere to go
Author notes
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Beauty of silence
A contest entry
- #2 OPTIONS CONTEST (: by Walk-Free.
650 points, ended December 24, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Hiding Your Wings. by November-Dani.
550 points, ended December 22, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really love that image.Is perfect and your poem is nicely done.The last line is my favorite.It reminds me of something I wrote a long time ago.Snow angels are beautiful and I love them.
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very nice work i love it flowws so nice keep up the great work....
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I love it, the gentleness of it, it was great how you described t, a 3rd p.o.v not to many like that, Great job *hugs*
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an imaginitve and creative write that i enjoyed reading, congratulations on a well deserved trophy and keep up the good work
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This is so well worded, and it made me smile. My friends and I made snowangels at midnight last night
happy new year^^ -
Snow Angel.
How touching. This is just gorgeous. Thank you so much for entering in my contest and congrats on your HM. Best of luck,
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Beautiful poem. I like the way the poem discribes the angel. It is writen wonderfully with really pure images.
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beautifully written
a realy pleasure to read
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good write
good luck wit the contest
MelissahhMidnit -
"soft chilled snow" Those words hit me like a plane fuselage from the sky. (little promo to Donnie Darko there) I really enjoyed this work. Probably because I'm obsessed with Angels. Either way. Great write.
Tal.
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Oh wow this is like a fairytale! I love angels You described it soooo well, I thought it was in front of me. Once again, a stunning work from you.
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very beautiful, some-what heartbreaking at the end but still great all the same!
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this is good and I liked it
keep up the good work and I
wish you the best in this
the power of your words are great
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brilliantly written and a bit nostalgic, i like it very much and its content :-)
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Thank you for entering this into my contest I wish you the best of luck
RedwingSpirit
congrats on the HM -
I like this. it's very good. I like the imagery in it. I love the picture you painted for me. Thanks for your entry, best of luck in my contest. Congradulations on your honorable mention! Keep up your amazing work.
Crimson -
Great Imagery
I found a lot of great imagery and serene emotion with this peice, however when reading it outloud I could not find the flow I was looking for. -
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I feel so stupif commenting on this again (:
But I honestly forgot about this wonderful poem (how could I?).
Amazing imagery and like I said earlier, you'll win something with this entry
Thanks for entering
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Wow......
Hell, you did such a wonderful job with this i didn't even NEED the picture to go by. You painted such soul driven imagery and beauty with this write. Exactly what i asked for.
Kudos and thanks for entering!
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sorry spelt it wrong try again fantastic
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fatastic
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"Her soft soles rest upon nature"
this is one of your most beautiful writes, dear.
there was such an amazing use of imagery.
you'll win something with this entry!
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