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marriage rituals

A boy looks through the window
he sees' an empty room
all the dust
all the gloom.

His parents died
years ago
on the couch
in the same room.

The couch is gone
but memories stay
he sat and watched
as his parents were maimed.

The house was robbed
and partially burned
when his sister
heard certain words.

She was a mistake
they loved him more
so she made him watch
as she turned them to gore.

Now she's dead
he killed her
as his parents
had done before.

Now he leaves
the house is gone
blood stains and memories
make bad wedding scenes.

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  • sociaL IntollErance
    December 22, 2007

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    It is an extremely good piece that tells a gruesome story of heartache and revenge. I find myself wondering why does it involve wedding scenes?