Alone with my thoughts is all I want to be
The confusion alone is enough for me
You will never get it, nobody ever will
This place is my own, a place that stands still
People talk about being alone like it is bad
To be honest, you really can't tell if it's all you've had
Things will not change or fall apart
A place I am safe, alone with my heart
There is no lies or wondering why
No broken relationships or reasons to cry
No doubting myself or where I went wrong
The silence fills the room with its beautiful song
Just self reflection while the world is at bay
A moment of my own to drift away
To another place where dreams become real
Where pain is nonexistant and I'm not made of steal
A place where I can truly be myself
No inhibitions, leaving emotions on the shelf
Alone
What did you think
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i love this poem it touched me got me with a energy great job!!!
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OH MY GOD!!! is all i can say im just in awe
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Brilliant!!!
This is a beautiful piece, it flows rythmically. I can COMPLETELY agree with this poem, it expresses how most people like us feel half the time. I especially loved lines 5-18 (most of the poem) it really did explain my feelings, and apparently yours too.
I'm awarding you 3 applause, because you deserve it!!! This is truly a breath taking and amazing write, you used emotion, which is key, and even threw in a little bit of perspective.
I think you shoul enter this into a contest some time, it would win, thats a fact! I wish that I had written this piece. You also spelt everything right, which is hard to find around this site.....
I loved this poem and can COMPLETELY RELATE to it. I hope that you get many reviews, but girl you better get this thing OFF the shameless list, thats mainly for bad poetry, or poetry that don't get no reviews!!
I hope you keep writing and get lots of applause.
Keep writing with that style of yours!
Annie Shadows♥
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Wow
Great poem here...So full of emotion and quite descriptive for your reader. The flow is good too. I know how you feel so I can relate. Great job on this one!
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I LOVED THIS!!! it just really connected to me, i love it.
except the last sentence sort of is just there, not in any particular order. still very well put
i felt there was a bit of dded tension and wanting to read the rest as it was one paragraph, great use of spacing and rhyme.
3 claps for being brilliant!!!
i seriously wish i had written this lol. its that great. hopefully not over reacting. i just really conected to it coz I love my alone time. and i think i shall stop now or else i could go on for another whole page.
cheers
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