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Hug me

Hug me.
Hold me close and
kiss my cheek.  Tell me that
you love me and squeeze me real tight.
Let go.

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cinquain

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  • azure85 gold member
    December 18, 2007
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    Oh, L5 made me laugh, you are hugging a little too tight. A sweet cinquain, and a fun to read. Thank you so much.