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Young Love (Cinquain)

Young love
fun to be in
happy hearts aflutter
thoughts of none but the one adored
always

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Love you Tory

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  • azure85 gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    How sweet and beautiful, and for that special someone in your life. A well written cinquain about what life is for, thank you so much.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    December 17, 2007
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    well done. sometimes that works and sometimes it doesnt.
    well penned.

    Love,
    tory