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Into the Black

into the black
into the vortex
of the universe
swallowed
cold, lost
spiralling
and twisting
within

a light,
ten thousand
lights ahead
hope, a
new
beginning
filled
with thousands
of new
worlds

into the black
into the night
of destiny
where only dreams
dare
and science
wonders

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  • aslanlight
    December 30, 2007

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    Not far removed from the way I see Black Holes! Yes, hope and new beginnings; if I were to write one it'd be pretty much similar to this and that's the biggest compliment I can give! (Only mine'd be better of course...tee hee hee)

    Peace Georgia