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Emotionless

The spirit of the moon eagle flies,
High above the skies,
It dives into my heart,
And rips it apart,
Now i have nothing left inside,
Im just an emotionless shell,
Not feeling too well,
I used to feel plenty,
But now im empty.

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  • My Selfish Romance
    December 17, 2007
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    Is this true or made up? It's really good Well done,
    Rhianna


    • filth in th beuty
      December 23, 2007
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      well its sorta half true coz i do feel pretty empty most of the time, and i also actually used 2 wear brighter clothing and i used 2 b 1 of those normal happy kids whos only problem was wether or not theyre pretty enough 4 the guy they liked. But not anymore. So i guess that in a way it is true.

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    December 17, 2007

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    I'm sorry you feel empty. But it's good you can be honest with yourself through writing about it.
    Here's a hug to hopefully make it a little better. Meanwhile take care and keep writing.
    Brian

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