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Numb

Never feeling just there.
Umbrellas can't protect me from this rainfall.
Mutilation, cuts bruises, can't feel it
Barely Alive

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  • maralisa silver member
    January 10, 2008
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    very deep but a great write


  • PsychoticallyInsane
    January 2, 2008

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    it was too short for my liking, but brilliant none the less. straight to the point and did relate well to the picture. Unfortunatley, not what I am looking for. Better luck next time, and thanks for entering!!


  • jcat gold member
    January 1, 2008

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    You know that you have hit rock bottom when you reach the numb stage!!! This was a very deep piece by you!!


  • Atrophya
    December 29, 2007
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    interesting...