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You, rape your love
through misbelief
and dillapidated promises
Letting
your alter ego
made of papered heart
die through ice
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Author notes
Written December 16, 2007
A contest entry
- Super Quickie PIF Prompt!! by Poetic Tasha.
650 points, ended December 16, 2007, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Short, precise, and strong.
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Excellent, sharp, great emotion, and such creative interpretation of the prompt. Congratulations on the gold, so well deserved!
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Wow... this is an exceptional poem and no wonder you won gold for this one, my friend. Excellent - and such power and impact achieved through brevity. This one speaks to me.. I've always wondered why people choose to wrap themselves, their hearts in ice. Beautiful.
~ Nicolette
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Those "paper hearts" are amazing, aren't they?
Great poem. Congratulations on the gold.
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this is excellent, your voice is very strong in this poem...
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amazing write. thank you for your entry
Tasha
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*poke* <--- that's for being better than me.
<--- that's for making it look darn good.
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