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Love that has left me puzzled

Your passion surrounds me
How oh how did I live without you?
Push me down
And climb on top
Show me how it’s done
No sweet little soft kisses
I want long passionate ones
Warm this heart that’s frozen
Or this body that’s numbed
Love me
Kiss me
Have me
Take me
Make it worth all the hate and hurt
That may come after
(In and out)
Oh God the warmth
Never do I want you to leave
Although I know you must
But is it only lust?

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  • kermie4201
    October 24, 2008

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    I absolutely loved this. Your emotions are expressed so well in this, and I could feel the energy surge throughout as I read each line. Amazing write. And I honestly would leave this the way it is.