They tear me up
they tear me down
they do it enough
to make me frown
They dont give a shit
unless it hurts
they do it and do it
till my soul burns
Im all over the place
Im so weak
scars on my face
as my body slowly bleeds
They leave me there
nowhere, all torn up
nobody cares
even though they know Iv had enough
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wow this was good the ryhming was amazing as well. you did a great job expressing your emotions.
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Thanks for the comment, am returning it to say both thank you and wow. I like your work, it is deep, thoughtful and well put together. I certainly hope to hear more from you.
Nightshade T J James
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