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The Flowers Mourn

Flowers of sweet scent and color,
beautiful and pure,
mask the smell of rotting flesh
and try cheering the demure.

Requiem chants, burial songs,
are sung in a melancholy way
as black-clad mourners weep bitterly
over those whom, in coffins, lay.

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  • Brown-Eyed-Wolf
    October 16, 2008
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    perfect

    again, really really really good.


  • Pandorea
    December 16, 2007
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    nice.

    short, sweet and to the point. I really like the idea here and how you've written this. well done!