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Metronome

This metronome
of impertinence
composed a familiar tune,
  -Which long ago did reside within me.

It danced throughout my eardrums,
vividly painting,
the fragments of my past.

I looked away only to find,
it was inescapable.
  -My mind did not care to hide.

It's fingers wrapped around me,
suffocating, it grasped.
I choked.
  -Only to find I could still breath.

Greedily my lungs expanded,
taking in that air of life,
no longer did memories surround me.

I released it reluctantly,
confidence now by my side,
and your heartbeat still resounding.
  -My personal lullaby.




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Sleeping soundly to the lullaby of your heart.

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  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    December 18, 2007

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    beautifully written from the prompt bringing a uniquness and depth to it. well done and best of luck