Haiku humor
Within a well felt tumor
Became holy rumor
Author notes
Humor leads to reason for living leads to healing leads to disease in all its varied forms to retreat until we wonder what it was in the first place. Freedom comes from the inside out (the center of the tumor must be reached for healing). Ever meet someone who had cancer but had a really good attitude? I have. They died, but only physically...their spirit couldn't be taken. Laughter is good medicine. Sometimes, I've heard, a person can WILL away sickness...serious sickness, too! But either way...humor is a win/win. Be of good cheer, for I have overcome....Peace & Love. ET
Written November 1st, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- i need a little wedge of hope. by stephanie sunshine.
600 points, ended February 23, 2005, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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ah, yes. brings back memories. i recall this one of yours and i'm glad you entered it into the contest. i don't think i would have "gotten it" without the explanation, so it is DEFinitely stimulating in the thought department. however, for me, the elusive meaning also translates to elusive connection on my part.
thanks so much for taking time to enter this contest. i appreciate it! -
wicked
(a great write)
thank you for all of your concern and insight.
keep'em comin please...
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and now there are four
thanks to haikumonk and maureen
i went on a wacky haiku binge for some time
and now, you
although i do sense the seriousness of this piece
(yep susan, i think he's talking about you know what)
think laughter is what got me over a really tough patch these past few months...maybe even why i'm feeling so much better.
looking forward to reading more of your work...actually "discovered" you via a comment you made on one of musestalker's newest pieces...it made me laugh so hard, i had to come and visit!
~liz -
Much confusion uprose as I read this. I didn't know whether to laugh or frown then I read your title and chuckled stubbornly lol. I like this..a good solid haiku.
Good job!
Much love and peace
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jeeze. what's more poetic? the poem or the explanation? best of luck for the contest. this is deserving, methinks.
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Oh LOL...I am always wondering where your mind wanders. Sometimes I read your thoughts and poetry and I wonder if you think too much {not that is ever a bad thing, in fact it may be a blessing}
Funny little Ku you have here...definately unique~~ could only come from a mind that rolls around as much as yours seems too
~~Dawn
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Oh my
I had to laugh
I had to read it twice myself
But I got it
Nice one hun... chuckles
Good luck in the contest
Luv ya
Susan~~~
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Ok, I'm so glad you are writing again.. but please, supply the translation to these! lol Well-felt tumor? Ok, I won't go into what I'm thinking, probably wrong anyway. Because I can't get to the holy rumor part no matter what way I go. waaa I'm soo blonde.
~ becky
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I'm up to stttttttttretching. How is it you are determined to rhyme this growth? LOL...... You're the fun of it,....intended or not!
Blessings this day. CookieZeal/Di -
Read this countless times ET...and the only clues are the bright uplifting picture and the title...so am presuming , perhaps incorrectly , that it conveys hope...that its all in the perception and how we view life ??
Thought provoking in its brevity...!!!
~ sonia ~ X
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Ok my friend..I bite.. I don't get it. So...does that make me normal...or stupid...or obtuse...LOL Ack.. I need brain food!
hugs.
Mary Ann
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