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You...

You make me feel good.
You make my heart pound.
You make the grass grow.
You make me know,
I AM LOVED!

You make the sun rise.
You make the sky blue.
You make the rain die.
You make me live on.

You are the twinkle in my eye.
You are the sweet sound of birds.
You are the comfy winter snow.
You are the sweet boy that I know.

You are the lover at my door step.
You are the lover that I know.
You are the lover in my poems,
The lover in my novels.
You are the lover who will stay with me.

You make many things.
To many things to count.

You are anything and everything,
Whenever you make me laugh and/or smile.

Please tell me what you think

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  • TacoSexyFail
    January 11, 2008
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    aaww tis sweet I loved it much much


  • mydnyteharvest
    December 16, 2007

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    That's very personal and very touching. I like how you used the similar beginnings with the different endings on the lines to show just how much he means to you: everything.


  • Naznomarn
    December 16, 2007
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    how... sweet