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stop me i'll allways be here

i love you do you love me
you say you don't but i don't know
it could be cover
from the rain of fire
you love one else
could that be it they met you first
so i'll always be here
no matter what i can't change the way i feel
you can slow me down but you can't stop me
ever

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  • DonSulliven
    December 17, 2007

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    not your best work but still really good. this is cute, i think, in the sence that the speaker wants the girl even though she said that she isnt interested.


  • HarleyHypnotize
    December 16, 2007

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    It seems to me you are trying very hard to be with this girl,but she is playing hard to get or there are mixed signals,but you won't give up.I can relate to this poem alot.I really enjoyed this.Great write!