Indecent,
Is that all I am?
Am I nothing to,
This horrific world?
The pain that haunts me,
Each waking day.
It never ever
Goes away.
Worthless,
Is that all you see?
I can't be something,
But obviously I am nothing.
Crazy,
I know I am.
Psychotic,
Straight to the bone.
Kill me,
Might as well do it,
Cause the whole world wants it.
I can't be anything
Above the standards
Of the fucking
Insane little world.
Damning me to
A place so forsaken.
A place forgotten,
Lost in time.
No cares
No one sees.
I am but,
A deadly disease.
Author notes
Well then..
I don't know if that's what you wanted...but it's what I think about...a lot.
It's my life.
A contest entry
- Write Me Pain by Broken Machine.
800 points, ended December 31, 2007, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I hope this came out right. Please comment!
Comments
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WOW
This was absolutely awsome! So much emotion screams. Brillient write.
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YAY! I loved it! It was what I was looking for. Great write!
"I know I am.
Psychotic,
Straight to the bone."
"No one sees.
I am but,
A deadly disease." I loved those lines! Outstanding job! ( =
And I don't want you to die! So keep holding your head high and stay strong, life won't always be so bad. It can't be, right?
Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest! -
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Dont worry
I am trying to hold up.
I'm working hard to doing that and it is actually taking me far, so that is the good news.
I am happy you loved my poem.
It randomly came...and I am happy it did. I needed to let some of this off my chest. ^_^ -
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I'm glad you're trying to hold up! And I'm glad it helped get things off your chest! ( =
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