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not really a poem something that just came from me

She’s hiding away from the rest of the world
She doesn’t make not one sound or movement
Her tears they fall in silent pain, not one hits the floor
Every happy moment gone no laugher not even a smile
She has lock herself in a room, the room is dark with only
A small hole that shows some light, you can’t see her ‘cause
She is way in the back in the corner where darkness is all you see

Her pain of sorrow that is taking over your body where did she go
The girl that everyone loved the one that wasn’t scare of anything
The little girl that talk to everyone and made others laugh and smile
Where did she go no one knows but the new her, the new her never
Smiles and doesn’t talk to anyone she’s hating the world right now
And nothing anyone does could help her stop doing what she’s doing

The new her hates everything and hates the guy that kids the one that
Knew everything about her a friend another mother to her but he killed
Her and now the new her is back to kill the one that did this, the one that
Is causing all this pain and sorrow in her life and in others to make him
Feel what everyone is feeling, to let him feel the pain and the sorrow

O but this kind of pain and sorrow isn’t the kind of pain you feel when you
Lose someone but the kind of pain you feel as you are dying, he killed
And now I must kill him, why should he get to live and he did all wrong
But yet she was the one who was killed and did all good, he shouldn’t be able
To live on the earth, he shouldn’t feel happy either, but I will be waiting for him
And when I find him o he will pay he will pay for what he has done to us and the
Sorrow and pain that he has cause everyone o yes he will pay.

I can’t be stop and nothing can stop me from doing what I pain to do to him
You don’t understand he killed her, the greatest happiest loving caring helpful
Person there was on earth he killed her and now he shall pay for what he has
Done, I won’t let him get away with this no I wont I dream that one day he will
Know what its like to feel the same thing she felt when she was dying. I want him
To feel every pain and sorrow that she felt and then die…………………………….. 

Author notes

I WAS THINKING ABOUT LUCY AND HOW THAT GUY KILLED HER AND INSIDE ALL I FELT WAS HATE AND I WANT HIM TO FEEL WHAT SHE FELT AND EVERYTHING BUT NOTHING THAT I SAY OR DO WILL EVER BRING LUCY BACK SHES GONE FOREVER SO THERES NOTHING REALLY I CAN DO ABOUT IT SO I WROTE THIS JUST TO SEE IF IT WOULD HELP ME FORGET ABOUT HOW THAT GUY KILLED HER AND IT HELP ME A LITTLE AND I DO FEEL BETTER

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  • tearyeyedbutterfly
    February 15, 2008
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    Sorry I submitted it twice. I really should not be allowed on the internet!


  • tearyeyedbutterfly
    February 15, 2008
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    This is very passionate, but at the same time, there is a weird numbness too. I love how it just all tumbles out, and there's not a lot of structure or rhythm or rhyme. I like that. It fits the content. Since your note suggested this is about an actual experience, I would like to say I can't imagine how painful that must be. I am very sorry for you.
    -Tearyeyed