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Pain To Pain

Ashes to ashes
dust to dust
if you must cut me
then cut me you must

Sand to sand
dirt to dirt
it doesn't matter anymore
this blade doesn't hurt

Flower to flower
bud to bud
you cut across my skin
and I blossom the blood

Words to words
breath to breath
this pain I carry with me
I'll carry with me 'til death

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  • Jade-
    December 16, 2007
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    Brilliant! Short but very sweet. Nice one.


  • Broken Machine
    December 16, 2007

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    Outstanding! Great job, I loved it!
    Very short and to the point!
    I loved the imagery you gave!
    Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest! ( =