I thought I knew you
but the truth was I didn't.
You had a mask
just like the millions
of other people.
During day light,
you were a fake happiness.
The lights,
then would go out,
and the mask was taken off.
What a bloody mess
laid underneath it.
I was your daughter
and you laid in my bed
as I screamed
that I was scared
of the dark.
You took
my innocence
for to many years.
I am in
and out of treatment
now for all your stupidity.
You hurt me more
then those tears
down my face
lead you to believe.
I not going
to stop my screaming
until I won
the war over me.
I thought I knew you...
A contest entry
- Write Me Pain by Broken Machine.
800 points, ended December 31, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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This is so sad i hope you are doing better and i must say you did do a great job with this poem all your feelings right there of hurt, and just oh my gosh this was amazing keep up your amazing poetry..
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Oh my gosh. That is so deep. It hurts quite bad to read it as I can understand to a certain level on how that would feel. I'm really sorry and you didn't deserve it. Thank you for sharing your poem with me.
Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest. ( =
I'm here if you need to talk.
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thanks
i am half way over what happen.... but the memory is burned in my mind..... i am glad you liked it
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The memories are the worst. It's so hard to get over it. You're very strong, keep your head high. ( =
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